Hannah came home from school today with this story that she wrote a few days ago. I had to share it. She has a great imagination...must be all the fairy books she likes to read.
(this is typed exactly as written)
The Under water Adventur
Long ago under water the fish awoke and rose. The bottom of the ocean is very dark, warm and cozy. The middle is lighter but not to light and a little bit colder. The top is very light and cold. When you try to talk to someone, bubbles come out of your mouth like little fish. try to swim one way and you will go back with the current. Then try to sleep under the water. You will still float along with the current. Then make the bubbles from your mouth take the current your way to an enchanted palace along the way. Go inside and you will see an enchanted king and queen fish in the palace. Thekind and queen will ascort you to your room. All the rooms are very squeshey becaus they're made for fish. Exept for three of them.
By Hannah
8 comments:
Sounds kinda fishy! Maybe the goldfish spirits have come to haunt (or inspire) her!
Love it!
I like it, very good hannah. I have one question, who are the 3 rooms for, the ones that are not made for fish? by the way, this is andrea
Hannah is a very talented writer. Hi, Jensens! it's andrea.
sorry to be a pain, but I am changing a few things and wondering if you could change my link to Shauna or Pineapple Princess (because you know I am queen of the pinepples, but it didn't sound as good!) I can now be found at www.ksomethingsomething.blogspot.com
blog on!
Thanks for changing it so quick and what a compliment! It will sustain me for YEARS.
Hey 'P.P.' are you mocking me? I'm really glad you see it as a compliment! Just being honest.
I love it!!!
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